The ‘Settings’ sequence presents a chain of backdrops against which personal events and dramas were played out. Within the dynamic period preceding Seeing Things when Heaney deliberately swooped on anything that stimulated memory or association (DOD 320), he allowed himself to be transported back by the poems that ‘came on’ to the sites, moments and emotions of previous experience, from where he weighed up what ‘In time … was extra, unforeseen and free’ (Markings I).
HV: ‘Squaring’ xxiv, Heaney’s hymn to natural sufficiency, records the ever-present potential of the senses for a fuller happiness (p147).
The poet composes an anthem to ‘perfected form’. His elated consciousness is undisturbed either by man’s clamour or signs of nature’s turbulence (Deserted harbour stillness); material nature lies in repose and in high definition below the water’s surface (Clarified and dormant under water), ahead is a sturdy man-made construction (harbour wall a masonry of silence). The whole contributes to a tableau of emotional completeness (Fullness).
Above him immaterial, unroofed airy ‘scope’ (Shimmer).
His eye-camera moves from close-by towards the high Atlantic, its surface-load of vessels all but motionless (moorings barely stirred) and barely perceptible to the ear (slight/ Clucking of the swell against boat boards).
Heaney’s fine-tuned consciousness (Perfected vision) picks out the objects deposited (consigned) on the ocean floor: delicate evidence of marine life (cockle minarets … shell debris) ; evidence of man’s environmental neglect (green-slicked bottle glass); geological erosion (a reddened bud of sandstone) (Sandstone Keepsake of Station Island highlights the ‘russet solidified gourd’ of eroded sandstone picked up in the Foyle estuary).
A perfect balance recorded as two major elements (Air and ocean) play off each other, as life and death, in age-old interaction (antecedents … in apposition).
Heaney’s solitary observer expresses his quiet elation as something all-pervasive, inescapable (Omnipresence), in perfect balance (equilibrium) and filled to capacity (brim) – ‘three extraordinary nouns – ‘Omnipresence, equilibrium, brim’ – the first theological, the second scientific. the third emotional (HV149)
- shimmer: quivering shine;
- laden: load-bearing, weighed down;
- mooring: where a boat is tied up;
- cluck: water sound resembling that of a hen;
- swell: regular movement of the sea;
- cockle: edible rib-shelled mollusc;
- minaret: slender tower;
- consigned: Latin etymology ‘placed with a sign’, in its proper place;
- reddened bud:
- antecedent: thing that went before;
- in apposition:
In Dawn of Wintering Out (1972) Heaney escapes from a coach full of academics and finds refuge on an Italian beach amidst ‘a scurf of winkles and cockles … Acres of their crisp, delicate turrets’;
HV: this ‘Squaring’ is the single most tranquil point in Seeing Things… The solitary view offers nothing but itself, an equilibrium of air and ocean … In Heaney’s wish for emblematic stillness there is almost no sound, and no sudden flashing of light (147).
HV 149 One feels oneself to be fully in the presence of the material harbour scene masonry, boat, stone – and equally in the presence of its felt aura – one of fullness, shimmer, equilibrium. All the elements of language, too, are in balance, the Latinate ‘clarified and dormant’ weighing against the Anglo-Saxon ‘swell against boat boards’. In the final sway of immaterial air against material water, each becomes ‘antecedent’ to the other, and neither takes priority. Air and ocean are then placed in a further Latinate ‘apposition’ with three extraordinary nouns – ‘Omnipresence, equilibrium, brim’ – the first theological, the second scientific. the third emotional. The first and second are Latinate, as befits their learned derivation, the third Anglo-Saxon, as befits its primacy of emotion: and the easy ‘slippage’ by which – ‘-brium’ drops off its Latinate ‘u’ and becomes the Middle-English ‘brim’;
HV(p149) sensual ‘brim’ is the sign of ecstatic sufficiency in the present … But – it should be said once more – this ecstatic sufficiency happens less within the flesh than within the mind: within a still and deserted moment vision is ‘perfected’, and air and ocean are ‘known’ in their reciprocity. The dynamic life of flesh would break this perfection – and so this poem of thanksgiving too is, like all ‘perfected’ things, a hieroglyph of death.
HV (152): let me, the poet says, see purely the co presence always and everywhere of life and death ‘known as antecedents / Of each other’.
- The 48 poems of the ‘Squarings’ sequences follow an identical format (12 lines in 4 triplets}; Heaney suggests the format just happened that way: ‘given, strange and unexpected’ … ‘I didn’t quite know where it came from but I knew immediately it was there to stay’(DOD 321);
- 4 triplets; line length based on 10 syllables; unrhymed;
- narrative flow adds enjambed lines to balance sentence volume;
- 8 sentences of varying length: 1 the setting; 2 above and below the water line; 3/4 single-word descriptors; 5 in the offing; 6 an enumeration of material objects; 7 interaction of elements; 8 emotional impact;
- vocabulary of tranquility: ‘stillness’, ‘silence’ etc; hints at quintessence: ‘fullness’ ‘perfected’ or superlative: final 3 nouns;
- HV 148There is an elated elaboration of grammar as well, as the poet suspends his perceptions on a visible string of past participles – deserted, clarified, perfected, consigned, known and an equally visible string of concrete and abstract nouns; stone, wall, masonry, silence, fullness, shimmer, Atlantic, moorings, clucking, swell, boards, vision, minarets, glass, debris, bud, sandstone, air, ocean, antecedents, apposition, omnipresence, equilibrium, brim. No one could fail to notice the see-saw between the most material nouns (stone, boards, glass) and the most evanescent ones (shimmer, equilibrium). Even the adjectives, in this poem of stillness, are mostly solid nouns pressed into adjectival service: harbour, boat, cockle, bottle, shell.
- Heaney is a meticulous craftsman using combinations of vowel and consonant to form a poem that is something to be listened to.
- the music of the poem: eleven assonant strands are woven into the text; Heaney places them grouped within specific areas to create internal rhymes , or reprises them at intervals or threads them through the text:
- alliterative effects allow pulses or beats, soothings or hissings or frictions of consonant sound to modify the assonant melodies; this is sonic engineering of the first order;
- for example, the final four lines are heavy with bi-labial plosives [b] [p], alveolar plosives [t][d] sibilant variants [s] [z][sh] and nasals [m] [n];
- a full breakdown of consonant sounds and where in the mouth they are formed is to be found in the Afterthoughts section;